unit 3.. paper

im really having a problem writing this paper, i asked a couple people if this is a good topic. but i get mixed answers.. and they ssay its not really argumentative.. i dont know what to do --- i have a overall idea in my head but i dont even know how to start the paper..

and i really need a good grade on this one!!!


my topic is funeral costs. and the fact that dying is very expensive and no one really knows about it till it happens and its a matter of a couple days to decide..

solutions - plan ahead, know your rights, and shop around....

my baby -totaled

_____________ THIS YEAR HAS BEEN RiDICULOUS

this has been the worst year hands down in my LIFE. from one tragedy to the next. im so stressed out. my grades are suffering im going to lose my scholarship if i dont pick my self back up.

this is a picture of my car, it was totaled. because i was leaving class last thursday, and this girl wasnt paying attention and rear ended me sending me flying into the guy in front of me. i no longer have acar. i was in the hospital all night.. !!! sigh. 2010= bad.

REVISED THESIS

The one thing in life people pay the least mind to is death, and what comes along with it; including costs. Funeral homes know that this is a painful vunerable time for the families and they basically fill their pockets on that sentiment. People need to familiarize themselves more with the options available to them when it comes to funerals because in the moment, money is the last thing on their mind..


I changed my audience in this thesis, giving myself more to work with instead of trying to change a business mind frame, it would be easier opening peoples eyes.

blog 1 unit 3 the thesis

The one thing in life people pay the least mind to is death, and what comes along with it; including costs. Funeral homes know that this is a painful vunerable time for the families and they basically fill their pockets on that sentiment. The funeral homes need to be more understanding to the moment and try to help the families instead of making money off of them .

heat vs magic

wow. unbelivable.. how is it that we go into overtime staying neck to neck with an awesome team like the magic with howard, reddick, and all those other good players.. and then somehow in overtime.. our wonderful players decide to start slipping up like beasely and chalmers air balls... fouls-- =0o

i cant be mad at them they did their thing.. but that shouldve been our win.

AGGRAVATIONS!!

I dont udnerstand how people can be so ignorant and cold hearted!! im dealing with so many home issues right now i really dont want to do anything but hide in a corner . at a time of crisis and misfortunes instead of my family coming together some of its just crumbling to pieces and losing sight of the important things in life. i really dont know how much i can scream before im heard. and hilarious thing im the most .. NOT dramatic or touchy person in the world .. yet here i am like a big whiner cry baby.
=0( crappy days.

blog 6

What issue are you thinking about trying to solve in Paper 4? Write
what you already know about this issue and ideas you have to solve it

my issues when writing paper 4 were mainly how to word things and not make it completely research and make it sound like a narrative while maintaining credibility and not getting boring. it was alot of stuff to do at once !! in the end i dont think my paper turned out too bad i think that all the good information i found was a little of a burden as well. i wanted to include everything i read and so many of the things dont seem like things that can be paraphrased or put in to my own words! like in class we had alot of example on what we should do when we come across those type of problems and that alot of it is covered in the book for class. another thing was citing the sources i found that was pretty annoying but in the end everything fit ..