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What issue are you thinking about trying to solve in Paper 4? Write
what you already know about this issue and ideas you have to solve it

my issues when writing paper 4 were mainly how to word things and not make it completely research and make it sound like a narrative while maintaining credibility and not getting boring. it was alot of stuff to do at once !! in the end i dont think my paper turned out too bad i think that all the good information i found was a little of a burden as well. i wanted to include everything i read and so many of the things dont seem like things that can be paraphrased or put in to my own words! like in class we had alot of example on what we should do when we come across those type of problems and that alot of it is covered in the book for class. another thing was citing the sources i found that was pretty annoying but in the end everything fit ..