advocacy ad idea

i really dont know if this is a good idea but its what i have right now so ill post it .. and based off of other peoples opnions ill change it ..

i was thinking like..a slide show?

and itll basically be from the moment you recieve the phone call that someone in your family has passed , showing the grief in their faces and then the next picture would be a calendar that shows how much time from that moment they have to bury the deceased. and then itll be a picture of them meeting with the funeral home people and like shaking their hand and the funeral home worker is smiling and like a little dialogue bubble with money signs .. and then the next clip will be like.. a SUPER nice funeral and then a picture of the bill and expensses. and then im not sure how to end it to get the idea, i guess like a directory of different funeral homes with the different pricing and a pre-need plan with a caption saying "plan ahead" .. something like that.. i dont know .. HELP? lol